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Post by Tahir Pirbhay on Mon Mar 31, 2008 3:16 pm

Enn gramaten, fam-la pe makiye devan laglas ek kan li fini, li
azenu devan so mari ki pe dormi, fer enn lizye du kuma enn mama pe get
so piti dormi ek anbras li lor so lazu. So mari leve, ek pus li...


Jistans twa depi mwa !

Monn mari plen avek to fason koze ek to latet jir pu konpran.

To agresivite ensit mwa pu vinn pli agresif ki twa.

Depi nu pe viv ansam tusel, mo ena lenpresyon ki to pe transform mwa an zanimo.

Seki explik de lane san okenn kreasyon artistik.

Mo pa sir si mo pu kapav viv avek to bann manyer pu lontan...

Sitan mo pe bwar bann konprime pu dormi, mo pe santi mwa deplizanpli
depresif ek lur, kumajir enn jimunn kinn perji jireksyon, ki nepli kone
kifer li vivan.

To pe detrir mo gu pu viv avek to bann ekzizans moral kan to mem to konport twa kuma enn fam ki ranpli ar imoralite.

Seki sorti depi to labus ek to fason viv, demanti seki to apel tomem.

To kone kifer maryaz aranze mars pli bien ki bann self-servis? Dan
premye-la ena respe. Enn relasyon ant enn mari ek fam, mem si laz inn
detrir romans, zot kapav viv ansam bien dan lamitye si ena respe.
Parkont, si ena lamur ek pena respe, li vinn enn lanfer ziska to kumans
ayir tomem pu amure avek seki fer twa sufer.

Monn abes mwa ziska pli pir pu fer sa relasyon marse ek zorji kan li
enn fyasko ek mo get mwa dan laglas, mo truv enn san lamurprop.

Si mo kontinye viv avek twa dan fason ki to ete, mo pu nepli kapav get momem.

To prezans pu fer mwa kontinye ena santima pu twa. Sekivejir, viv avek degu.

Mo pli gran fristrasyon, li pa kuma to jir, mo lanfans malere ek mo fami so inyorans.

Mo pli gran fristrasyon :

tonn fer mwa realize ki desizyon pli enportan ki monn pran dan mo lavi, li mo pli gran erer.

rido

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Post by DigitalBin on Mon Mar 31, 2008 3:36 pm

Tahir please use the "splog board" section for these kind of posts.
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Post by Mir@ndA on Mon Mar 31, 2008 3:44 pm

This is spam-botting Razz Tahir a minimum participation from you would be great Rolling Eyes
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Post by carrotmadman6 on Mon Mar 31, 2008 3:45 pm

Usual Post & Run... thank god, Autobot DigitalBin is on the lookout! Razz
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Post by Mir@ndA on Mon Mar 31, 2008 3:49 pm

ROFL moreover I think no one understands what's written up there. the language is too complicated Razz
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Post by Nash-1 on Mon Mar 31, 2008 3:56 pm

Dude don't take it bad, but on a forum usually you should do more than pasting posts from your blog. There are previous discussions to which you have not replied and you are giving the impression of being a bot Razz
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Post by carrotmadman6 on Mon Mar 31, 2008 4:03 pm

Mir@ndA wrote:ROFL moreover I think no one understands what's written up there. the language is too complicated Razz

I didn't bother to even read the 1st line... Razz

Nash-1 wrote:Dude don't take it bad, but on a forum usually you should do more than pasting posts from your blog. There are previous discussions to which you have not replied and you are giving the impression of being a bot Razz

A Deceptispampostbot then... lol!
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Post by offbeat_chick on Mon Mar 31, 2008 4:24 pm

to speak frankly, what Tahir wrote is very deep. He is a talented writer. Very Happy Mais Tahir kifaire to pa participer coument nous tous? li vraiment mal vu to facon to zis post et to aller la. peut etre dimune ti ena bane kestion pou pose toi. l'interet principale post kelke chose lor 1 forum c pou coumence 1 discussion et repone a bane feedbacks. dimoune pa pou pren la peine lir ki tone post si zot coner li pa vo la peine acoz to pa pou repone.
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Post by anteblog on Mon Mar 31, 2008 6:54 pm

merci pu sa "extre" la Tahir. sa inn bien aid nou lol!
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Post by slasher on Mon Mar 31, 2008 7:07 pm

nothing to add post plus 1 Spam blast Hijacked Mo pane lire mem ki Tahir in ecrire I'm Stupid P gagne paresse.
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Post by Nash-1 on Mon Mar 31, 2008 7:12 pm

slasher to pane rate grand choz lol 2
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Post by john on Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:09 am

it's a deep text definitely ... too bad, the author does not talk about the post itself .. however, i feel a lot of frustrations in it.

he has embarked on really subjective grounds...

It seems that the person in your text is more disillusioned and sad than anything else, and is now opening his eyes on life.

i don't think this is has something to do with the fact that arranged marriage is better or worse then 'love' marriage. Love is a too generic term and is too vast.

my opinion is that it seems the person is unhappy about his current life and wants to make a move and the easiest option is to point the finger to her partner.

"Si mo kontinye viv avek twa dan fason ki to ete, mo pu nepli kapav get momem."

this part is actually quite weird and from a logical point of view doesn't make sense (in my opinion) .. the person blaming her partner also has personal problems but can't accept that fact as well ..
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Post by Diya on Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:35 pm

Tahir's presentation of this particular relationship is interesting. too bad he did not give any further information Wink
what i think is that the woman so far has not shown any violence or evilness in her character. only the guy behave irrationally. perhaps he is jealous or too possessive and this is driving him mad
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Post by john on Thu Apr 03, 2008 8:13 am

yeah you might be right, he describes well how things are boiling up in the relationship.. the character does not really express the will to find real solutions though.. i guess it's intentional
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Post by DaLia on Thu Apr 03, 2008 6:55 pm

well I think you should not neglect the fact that this present extract is the last act of this play. we cannot know what happened before that made the man treat his wife like this. the mention of the woman's make up is a very important element too. usually it shows that the woman is quite superficial or ambitious.

i wish the author could enlighten us a little on this. Wink
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Post by fadilnet on Thu Apr 03, 2008 7:53 pm

bla..mo pas comprend so kreol Sad mais mo fine lir comments.
mais mo capave dire ene zafaire d'apres sa ki mo fine comprend - tou sa problem ki li p raconter la c'est la faute aux 2 membres du couple et surtout a l'homme a coz c'est ene la loi sa - l'homme toujours responsable. bizin remet chivalry back. a man and a woman should love each. they should both cheer themselves up always, cherish and blossom the love they share and of course never get into monotony. more importantly, the guy should play the role of a knight even if his woman is a feminist. chivalry is what makes things stack upon each other, and being wacko destroys monotony.
well, that's my way of doing things - being chivalrous and always be there for her and the kid. being courteous and charming even if it entails unleashing the feminine side of oneself helps keep things ongoing. nobody gets bored and it's always happiness even in dark hours.
and of course, there's NO blame game. both of them should find solutions to issues (which are themselves solutions in disguise). ambition is just another catalyst though the main catalyst for the husband is his wife and for the wife her husband. kids also play a role but they can lead to annoyance for a wife may consider a kid as being troublesome and a husband may find her/him too cute and awww.

i went a little off-topic and multilangual - comment dire "franglais" wlol
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Post by Nash-1 on Thu Apr 03, 2008 7:55 pm

i think John, Diya, Dalia and Fadil should get into play-writing. Their analyses are so deep. Very Happy Jokes apart, it's good to see some people liking Tahir's work. scratch
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Post by fadilnet on Thu Apr 03, 2008 7:58 pm

i am into cosplay (with some cti friends - nope, i'm no cti stud). already write scifi fanfic. gosh, i should re-publish those.

yes, we should write something - if you're all willing to, PM me. we could start a big mauritian fan fic. anyone interested?
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Post by john on Thu Apr 03, 2008 9:16 pm

Nash-1 wrote:i think John, Diya, Dalia and Fadil should get into play-writing. Their analyses are so deep. Very Happy Jokes apart, it's good to see some people liking Tahir's work. scratch

Suspect well... I did like the text, but I don't necessarily agree with things he said Smile

for the big mauritian fan fic.. er.. well.. I probably won't have time to participate fully Sad
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Post by Yan on Fri Apr 04, 2008 2:05 am

Arranged mariage rocks! Rock On
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Post by DaLia on Fri Apr 04, 2008 9:27 am

It depends on what kind of partner you get in the arranged marriage.
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